laboured breathing
echoing deep within
rhythmic reverberation
against soft smooth skin
aching sweet yearning
gentle undulating ride
fierce ardent loving
slow languorous slide
embedding yourself
into my consciousness
entering through liquid gates
wrapped around my senses
savoring drinking thirstily
warm silken fragrance
drawing me inexorably
into your still blue silence
~ by bunnyblu on November 11, 2007.
Posted in EROTICA, LETTERS TO A BLUE FROG & THE GAZELLE, SONGS/POEMS
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Your use of language in the poem is exquisite.
thank you barbara…